Continue the poem...

Alesis · Dec 29, 2013 22:16 185 342

Alesis OP

Dec 29, 2013 22:16

Each one posts a verse to create a poem...I'll start... The heartless man gaze at the black sea(continue)

185 replies

TinHeart

Jan 26, 2014 18:43

to return to his wife and son

Georginia

Jan 26, 2014 18:45

To be together where they belong

TinHeart

Jan 26, 2014 18:49

to the tine when time began

Georginia

Jan 26, 2014 18:51

Those r the times together they stand

TinHeart

Jan 26, 2014 19:04

protecting each other, protecting their land

Georginia

Jan 26, 2014 19:06

To withhold the enemies from snatching from thier hand

TinHeart

Jan 26, 2014 19:28

he remembers the sea he remember the sand...

Georginia

Jan 26, 2014 19:31

He remember all the good thing n bad thing thru out his life as a man

TinHeart

Jan 26, 2014 19:40

he kisses his sword with his fate in his palm...

Necessary_Evil

Jan 27, 2014 10:48

Fearing the enemy will know of his plan

Georginia

Jan 27, 2014 14:19

Shelter his family from the evil hand

TinHeart

Jan 28, 2014 01:11

He fights off the leader and the mercenary band

Georginia

Jan 28, 2014 13:07

His sword flash like lightening to kill the ememy.

TinHeart

Jan 29, 2014 09:52

He has his own wounds But the wounds of the heart have no remedy

Rohan786

Jan 30, 2014 04:28

Suddenly a sward came and cut his one arm... smiley

TinHeart

Jan 30, 2014 06:04

(Rohan,you are cruel smiley

) And he wakes up sweaty screaming and looks around

Necessary_Evil

Jan 30, 2014 12:20

His children are safe,his wife sleeps sound

TinHeart

Jan 30, 2014 14:35

He thanks God is over and kneels to the ground

Georginia

Jan 31, 2014 16:34

Again thru his hardwork that smile, love n life again he found.

TinHeart

Jan 31, 2014 17:30

Lonely were his days Lonely was his heart