Will You Marry Me..?
saahir 2013/05/01 15:08
Will you marry me?

I'm not handsome,
I'm not rich,
Neither I have banglow,
Nor having car,

But loving & caring,
A resposible person,
Respecting, giving honour,
Most humble,
Knowing value of a marriage tie,
And promissing to fulfill,
All my duties towads it,
Till my last breath..
I promise, I'll share
All my pleasures,
All my sorrow with you,

I promise to share,
All my hidden,
All my open,
I'll enjoy with your pleasures
I'll share all your pains,
I'll not let you cry,
Always I'll walk beside you,
Never leave you alone,
Give me your hand,
And hold my hand,
I pledge to abide
All responsibilities of marriage tie..

Give me your hand,
And hold tightly my hand,


"This poem is written on a request of my beloved sister, Princess_Soniya."

Thapasya 2017/08/24 08:47
Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...
saahir 2017/08/24 09:33
Thapasya: Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...

Thanks again for correcting me. I'll try to become rich now.lol.

Milisha 2017/08/24 12:20
Very nice poem /smiley
Maryam 2017/08/24 17:02
hmm.. This sounds ROMANTIC 💑
@Don@ 2018/06/23 06:21
,-gone-
~shiroz~fa 2019/05/06 01:27
I cant/smiley
saahir 2019/05/07 15:52
~shiroz~fa: I cant/smiley

But why?

Coookie 2019/05/24 23:01
Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u /smiley
saahir 2019/05/26 19:52
Coookie: Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u /smiley

Nice joke /smiley

David.adams 2019/05/29 21:14
Nice
Maryam 2019/05/29 22:52
saahir:
Dreams never come true.... /smiley
That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe

Maryam 2019/05/29 22:53
izac: True words of promise.
Only if the promise is not broken

saahir 2019/05/29 23:03
Maryam: That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe

naughty .lol.

Maryam 2019/05/29 23:07
saahir:
naughty .lol.
only naughty with Saahir .lol.

saahir 2019/05/29 23:51
Maryam: only naughty with Saahir .lol.

-welcome-/smiley

Tweetums 2019/06/08 06:03
This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
~shiroz~fa 2019/06/11 15:37
-nah- hmm
Milisha 2019/06/21 03:15
Yes! hold my hand tightly /smiley
saahir 2019/06/22 04:11
Milisha: Yes! hold my hand tightly /smiley

/smiley

zugzwang 2019/06/25 12:02
Tweetums: This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
good, I thought its serious matter

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