Will You Marry Me..?
162 replies
saahir
May 1, 2013 15:08
Will you marry me? I'm not handsome, I'm not rich, Neither I have banglow, Nor having car, But loving & caring, A resposible person, Respecting, giving honour, Most humble, Knowing value of a marriage tie, And promissing to fulfill, All my duties towads it, Till my last breath.. I promise, I'll share All my pleasures, All my sorrow with you, I promise to share, All my hidden, All my open, I'll enjoy with your pleasures I'll share all your pains, I'll not let you cry, Always I'll walk beside you, Never leave you alone, Give me your hand, And hold my hand, I pledge to abide All responsibilities of marriage tie.. Give me your hand, And hold tightly my hand, "This poem is written on a request of my beloved sister, Princess_Soniya."
Thapasya
Aug 24, 2017 08:47
Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...
saahir
Aug 24, 2017 09:33
Thapasya: Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...
Thanks again for correcting me. I'll try to become rich nowsmiley
Milisha
Aug 24, 2017 12:20
Very nice poem smiley
Maryam
Aug 24, 2017 17:02
hmm.. This sounds ROMANTIC 💑
@Don@
Jun 23, 2018 06:21
,-gone-
~shiroz~fa
May 6, 2019 01:27
I cantsmiley
saahir
May 7, 2019 15:52
~shiroz~fa: I cantsmiley
But why?
Coookie
May 24, 2019 23:01
Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u smiley
saahir
May 26, 2019 19:52
Coookie: Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u smiley
Nice joke smiley
David.adams
May 29, 2019 21:14
Nice
Maryam
May 29, 2019 22:52
saahir: Dreams never come true.... smiley
That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe
Maryam
May 29, 2019 22:53
izac: True words of promise.
Only if the promise is not broken
saahir
May 29, 2019 23:03
Maryam: That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe
naughty smiley
Maryam
May 29, 2019 23:07
saahir: naughty smiley
only naughty with Saahir smiley
saahir
May 29, 2019 23:51
Maryam: only naughty with Saahir smiley
smileysmiley
Tweetums
Jun 8, 2019 06:03
This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
~shiroz~fa
Jun 11, 2019 15:37
smiley hmm
Milisha
Jun 21, 2019 03:15
Yes! hold my hand tightly smiley
saahir
Jun 22, 2019 04:11
Milisha: Yes! hold my hand tightly smiley
smiley
zugzwang
Jun 25, 2019 12:02
Tweetums: This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
good, I thought its serious matter
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