Promise
saahir 2012/09/26 13:01
Moon was disapeared
some where far of the ocean

it was a dark night
and I was waiting

I looked a glance in the sky
stars were teasing me

frogs some where in dark
laughing at my folly

but I was confident
I laid down on sand bed

I dint remember
when slumber covered me up

I opened my eyes when
some rays of rising sun fell on me

It was her last promise
she failed to fulfil it

IFTIKHAR-KHAN 2014/04/29 07:30
good
_ShAnE_StArK_ 2016/01/06 15:03
Wow bro good one../smiley
Smarty 2016/06/12 06:52
Cross my heart.
tRuEbLuE 2017/11/21 20:47
Smarty: Cross my heart.


And hope to die

saahir 2017/11/22 13:09
tRuEbLuE:

And hope to die

Don't try to X her /smiley smarty is heart less 😆

tRuEbLuE 2017/11/22 13:31
saahir:
Don't try to X her /smiley smarty is heart less 😆


Cross my heart and hope to die is a quote :-D

i_am_what_i_am 2017/12/28 22:14
As the old saying goes...Promises are made to be broken
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