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saahir
2012/03/28 17:49
At the top edge of a high rock I saw her very first time In a semi moonlight She was in a complete white dress Apeared before me As an beautiful angel I was at a distance little bit far She looked at me A glance full of Love Then she raised her head Up to the sky Ah! Saahir You are too late She screemed out & jumped Down deep in the water of Flowing streem I don't know who she was...?
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aprillia
2012/04/04 04:59
be asured she will come in ur life soon my friend.... smiley
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/05 04:17
How sweet smiley
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maryanne
2012/04/06 21:34
Gud poem
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saahir
2012/04/07 10:45
Unic0rn_GirL: How sweet smiley
not more dn u.
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jaQui
2012/04/08 16:12
Very nice smiley
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bLaCk_LiSt3d
2012/04/13 15:13
maryanne: Gud poem
I see cleavage..oh my.I think its calling me!
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ChocolateThunder
2012/04/16 20:07
Okay next tyme dont look at her.Signs of starting 2 c e light n angels means ure dying dear...
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saahir
2012/04/26 10:33
ChocolateThunder: Okay next tyme dont look at her.Signs of starting 2 c e light n angels means ure dying dear...
It's just poem dear.
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FARAH
2012/04/28 02:50
Y u n0t tried to save her lyf ? ? ? ? N yes , c0mm0n sense says anglez never die !smiley
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saahir
2012/04/28 07:44
FARAH: Y u n0t tried to save her lyf ? ? ? ? N yes , c0mm0n sense says anglez never die !smiley
Now she is in my dreams.
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FatimaAwan
2012/05/01 03:36
Awwww lovely words
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FatimaAwan
2012/05/01 06:59
Dream boy you are Saahir
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sagy086
2012/05/02 07:24
She is pretty
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aprillia
2012/10/17 12:57
did u find ur beautiful angel rightnow bro?
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Manal
2012/10/17 14:10
Nicesmiley
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jamella16
2012/10/17 15:46
hmmm very nice poem. smiley
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Fantasy
2012/11/22 02:55
Its yr imagination .. Very beautiful thought
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saahir
2012/12/03 17:50
FatimaAwan: Dream boy you are Saahir
Yes i can bewitch you.
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Rohan786
2014/05/17 04:40
Nice....
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Kayli
2015/05/18 21:02
saahir: At the top edge of a high rock I saw her very first time In a semi moonlight She was in a complete white dress Apeared before me As an beautiful angel I was at a distance little bit far She looked at me A glance full of Love Then she raised her head Up to the sky Ah! Saahir You are too late She screemed out&jumped Down deep in the water of Flowing streem I don't know who she was...?
so sad smiley
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