I love you 'O' my Mom
95 replies
saahir
Mar 8, 2012 14:32
I love you
'O' my Mom
As much
I love my God
I remember you
As much I remember my God
I remember once I was hungry
I ask you for food
You gave me a cup of milk with piece of bread
I looked at your face
You read some line on my forehead
You smiled & said "Eat my child"
You pointed your finger towards cooking vessels
Both were covered with lids
I finished my breakfast
You went out
I removed the lids
Both vessels were EMPTY
I cried in a sky breaking voice
'O' My God
saahir
Apr 9, 2012 05:54 Male1974: nice story..really poetic.
these lines are from my true life story.
saahir
Apr 9, 2012 06:01Both poems are from lines of my true story.
Amywilliam
Apr 9, 2012 06:30touchy
cmail
Apr 9, 2012 06:45 saahir: I love you'O' my MomAs muchI love my GodI remember youAs much I remember my GodI remember once I was hungryI ask you for foodYou gave me a cup of milk with piece of breadI looked at you faceYou read some line on my foreheadYou smiled & said "Eat my child"You pointed your finger towards cooking vesselsBoth were covered with lidsI finished my breakfastShe went outI removed the lidsBoth vessels were EMPTYI cried in a sky breaking voice'O' My God
hearts touching poem yes in this world mom is mom nothing to be comparison no one can't replace her.her place above the god.... this poem above all poem my karma for it
Unic0rn_GirL
Apr 9, 2012 07:36 saahir: I love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God
I remeber
When I was in need to pay
My school fees
You went to money lender
You mortgaged your ornaments
And I paid my school fees
I remember
Your eyes were flooded with tears
In gratitute to Almighty God
I remember the way
You saved my carrier
l love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God
Heart touching great mom 
Sweetcapricorn
Apr 9, 2012 09:30
nice poem i like it
thanx for sharing.
Rosay
Apr 12, 2012 04:05senty
Shush14
Apr 12, 2012 11:31awesome poem..
Misty
Apr 14, 2012 15:42I think its brilliant especailly 4 payin tribute 2 the most important person in ur life the 1 person who helped gav u life. Words of truth spoken here.
Manal
Apr 16, 2012 06:08i missed my mom
TemPEST
Apr 16, 2012 22:33Always it man
i love u mum
i love u mum
saimmaz
Apr 17, 2012 18:32nice n touchy
Itysam12
Apr 25, 2012 08:32Tanx for dat
aprillia
Apr 25, 2012 11:54mama in my bday w/o u.
n this post make me more 
in my bday w/o u.
n this post make me more 
SoftwareboY
Apr 30, 2012 17:55Karma for princess_nisha
FatimaAwan
May 1, 2012 07:02I love my mama toooo much
Mace_Seiler
May 1, 2012 12:46Mom, lovya lots
nehapatel
May 2, 2012 05:30Vewi touching hun!!
Priya_sharma
May 2, 2012 05:41Good 1
saahir
May 2, 2012 20:45 princess_nisha: The m0ther t0pic is vry em0ti0nal 4me.and bhai this is beautifuln0 m0ther n0 life
Thnx sis u hv read it b4.n0 m0ther n0 life
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