resphanto V*S Ouch[O1]
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bLaCk_LiSt3d
2010/11/04 17:19
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okay,the rules: Verses 2each(1 post=1verse) (2days limit) Prize,as written in the tourney 100+ to the winner... judges: open to public SHOW TIME!! sHow wHatCa goT...
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Shaev7
2010/11/06 19:25
Ok if i go 4d votes,i ain gon get dis... OUCH: 2much furkin of mama n less dissin his oponent. Gud punchlines @d 1st vas. 2nd vas,ye came a lil weak there. Metaphores:i cnt c any ther. Flows: not hard. N wer nt real. So watchout. Resphanto: yeah,tuk it slow @1st vas wt matured punchlines. 2nd vas he sealed it all wt hard rhymes n punches. Metaphores: Non. (but i fink i cn find simile or sumptin.) flows: he got few gud flows @d 2nd vas. He saw it fr an angle n takled his oponent wel. 1ST JUDGE: GOES TO RESPHANTO. 2nd please?
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bLaCk_LiSt3d
2010/11/06 21:48
Shaev7: Ok if i go 4d votes,i ain gon get dis... OUCH: 2much furkin of mama n less dissin his oponent. Gud punchlines @d 1st vas. 2nd vas,ye came a lil weak there. Metaphores:i cnt c any ther. Flows: not hard. N wer nt real. So watchout. Resphanto: yeah,tuk it slow @1st vas wt matured punchlines. 2nd vas he sealed it all wt hard rhymes n punches. Metaphores: Non. (but i fink i cn fid simile or sumptin.) flows: he got few gud flows @d 2nd vas. He saw it fr an angle n takled his oponent wel. 1ST JUDGE: GOES TO RESPHANTO. 2nd please?
shaev said it all... Ouch diz aint a fucking pornsite dude,so nxt time try to cut down the sexscene n play it gangsta ayt?.,n there' s where u let u guard down.. Resphanto 1st gud one,second cumbck a lil hardr but still need sum work n upgrade urself Judgin by the punches,flows others like psonalz,multies,nameplays which i cant see any(try 2 use all of diz shxt nxt time)...i vote 4 resphanto,so amma wit shaev nice job both...
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Shaev7
2010/11/07 05:45
FINAL JUDGE: Since we got 3judges and alrdy goes 2Resphanto. There's no nid 2 wait 4d 3rd one. The battle goes to Resphanto. Ouch it was a good 1. U showd a true gee. Neva gv up.
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