Voices in my head - ZJ
Zaarah_jasmin 2010/09/12 20:03
Unspeakable silence night hearing the sound of the thunder growling outside It's cold and dark alone in my lonely mind that passing through I think, think,and think again done it over and over in my mind tears just flowing down from my eyes.

I think, think and think again so I done it over and over in my mind voiceless foughtwith the emotion that trapped deep inside.

Then I hear this voices whispering to me, warm voices soft voices cold voices in my head they keep rewinding over again so I think, think and think again done it over and over in my mind but I’m just clueless without a words and frozen.

Godma? grandma? where are you now? are you in a happy places right now? coz I need to know that you are there, there in my mind and my heart please be there and don’t go too far away from me.

I know that it’s been so long since you’ve been gone and no matter where you are right now , I wish you are in a place that you should be , that is heaven.


I pray for that in my heart coz in my heart you will remain inside me.
Godma, grand ma? are you out there watching me with a smile?

Coz I miss you so much, yes I do and I will always do for I will wait till
the day of kingdom shall come and we all could be together again.

Godma, grandma I miss you like a flower miss the sun..

Laketempest 2010/09/12 20:06
-hubba- you always make some great poems, i like this one /smiley
evil_inside 2010/09/12 20:07
Gud 1 lolz.
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Musafir 2010/09/12 20:10
Surely she is in heaven watching you /smiley
Zaarah_jasmin 2010/09/12 20:10
thanks /smiley alot..!!
Frayz-3 2010/09/12 20:12
Great one...
KHAN 2010/09/12 20:13
(cheering)
integrity-daolyboy 2010/09/12 20:14
/smiley
jaQui 2010/09/12 20:16
M_U_S_A_F_I_R: Surely she is in heaven watching you /smiley
yeah u bet mister/smiley

EpIcInCoGnItO 2010/09/12 20:16
Great stuff,original and unique /smiley
Solostino 2010/09/12 20:16
She is always in ur heart.
Zaarah_jasmin 2010/09/12 20:18
yes, my godma n grandma are alwaysin my heart n thoughts../smiley
_ReYeZ_ 2010/09/12 20:18
its perfect lol
BarbertoV 2010/09/12 20:20
She stil fil for u
Good 2010/09/12 20:22
Nice poem...
_Duckling_ 2010/09/12 20:23
beautiful topic.
Zaarah_jasmin 2010/09/12 20:23
thanks you all friends your every words means alot to me..
wizkid007 2010/09/12 20:25
nyc 1 zaarah
pricy 2010/09/12 20:26
I always love your poem, its impressive keep it up friend and bring up another one...
KiNg_SouL 2010/09/12 20:27
Nice topic from you.
buddyboy4cuties 2010/09/12 20:28
Great poem
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