* you are the one * by zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:34
a girl once love a guy from a distance..
she's a loner..
she always watch him from afar..
though she may never be with him as often as she would want to,
that didn't stop her from loving him so much..

on the contrary, the guy often notice the girl staring at him,
her way of looking at him made him feel so annoying,
he cant explain why he's very much affected by the way she stares,
he cant deny the fact that the girl is beautiful..
Joyy 2009/01/05 10:08
Am in luv wit d writer
EngineerT 2009/01/06 19:14
/smileywonderful story of lov am very sure that this type of love is rare
Aleen 2009/01/06 21:10
nice and touching...keep writin grl
Boy_5 2009/02/18 10:44
What a wonderful story! This story will gìve a remain to us to stay and loyal to someone that we love soo much!
Waste 2009/02/19 08:07
Even i hate short stories.
Blaze 2009/02/19 16:55
Nice /smiley
Farmer 2009/02/19 19:00
Cool story.. Pretty deep tho
GhAyAl 2009/02/21 11:18
OuTSTANdING !
GhAyAl 2009/02/21 11:18
OuTSTANdING !SIMPLY AWSME!
sINdArELa 2009/02/22 16:19
/smiley im sad n0w..a very t0uching lurve st0ry..
Eternal_Knight 2009/04/30 06:30
Nice poem . I loved it
rhowZz 2009/05/02 03:13
Nice story.. even it made me feel sad. /smiley
haiz.. keep writing good stories makulet na mod.
gInGeRjAdE 2009/05/02 17:10
/smiley very sad.
ZE_ROSS 2009/05/02 18:04
Zheira you really made me cry/smiley This beautiful story reminded me my angel my heaven 0n earth, with her my life exists!
MaDdY 2009/05/10 13:31
nice it is
MaDdY 2009/05/13 12:05
nice
tRuEbLuE 2009/05/14 15:56
you love bringing people to tears neng. Its beautiful.
SexcPoP 2009/05/15 08:38
/smiley
HiDaYaH 2009/05/16 06:02
Its a sad story. . .*sob3*
Smartasad 2009/05/16 12:44
Hy.Zheira.
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