Give Me Some Time
31 replies
saahir
Sep 21, 2016 06:49
Let me know your wishes So that I may fulfill The promisses I made I promise not to leave you alone When tears flowing from your eyes And will make you laugh though suffering my heart with pain Wait a little while.. Let me free my nations Those who don't have roof over their heads Having no education suffering from hunger even lacks of all basic needs.. Then I'll turn to you And fulfill all your wishes Please wait my sweet smiley Give Me Some Time...!!!
_SonIcGirL_
Sep 21, 2016 06:54
Good smiley
Kalpana
Sep 21, 2016 07:22
Ditto sonicsmiley
ABHIRAJ
Sep 21, 2016 07:57
Tuff task.not so easy.nyc words..
@RADHIKA @
Sep 21, 2016 08:01
nice line
ABHIRAJ
Sep 21, 2016 14:00
PRINCESS SUNl: Wht to mean tuff task.ls lt tht easy to break a promise
its rather easy to break ur headsmiley smiley
ArjunPratap
Sep 21, 2016 14:30
nice one
Kayli
Sep 21, 2016 18:55
Excelent topic
KingFISHER
Sep 24, 2016 02:48
meaningful lines. Superb!
THE_SPEAR_KING
Oct 3, 2016 03:57
Patriotism comes first. smiley Nice words with great sense
SONIC
Oct 5, 2016 10:57
I loved it!
jaQui
Nov 9, 2017 18:52
Beautiful smiley
jaQui
Nov 9, 2017 23:30
Karma!!! smiley
i_am_what_i_am
Dec 28, 2017 22:18
Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.
saahir
Jan 2, 2018 05:17
i_am_what_i_am: Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.
But the next wave could be a chance to avail.
i_am_what_i_am
Jan 2, 2018 06:37
saahir: But the next wave could be a chance to avail.
Rivers dont have waves, only ripples
saahir
Jan 2, 2018 10:17
i_am_what_i_am: Rivers dont have waves, only ripples
tnx 4 info smiley
i_am_what_i_am
Jan 2, 2018 10:46
saahir: tnx 4 info smiley
My pleasure smiley
Maryam
May 27, 2018 15:51
Nice post Saahir but For how long can ur sweet smiley wait smiley
saahir
May 27, 2018 17:30
Maryam: Nice post Saahir but For how long can ur sweet smiley wait smiley
As long the problems could solved.
Maryam
May 27, 2018 20:57
saahir: As long the problems could solved.
Then I guess forever cuz these prblms Can't be solved cmpltly
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