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Broken HeArT

saahir · May 11, 2014 18:56 8 56
saahir OP
May 11, 2014 18:56
It was half moon night.. At the sea-shore.. A girl alone.. Roaming her fingers.. On the sandy ground.. Sketching some lines.. Throwing a glance.. Looking at them.. Changing her angles.. I was at a distance.. Little far.. Suddenly I heard a cry.. Why you broke my heart..? Where I was wrong..? Why did you go away..?
8 replies
jaQui
May 11, 2014 19:14
#1
Nice n sad smiley
jaQui
May 11, 2014 19:16
#2
Very good poem of ur own
Kayli
May 11, 2014 19:35
#3
So sado smiley
Georginia
May 12, 2014 00:44
#4
Dats sad bro..smiley
ladyme
May 12, 2014 06:22
#5
Another break-up
-LILY-
May 12, 2014 06:43
#6
wow its so touching poem my sweet bhai...
Anuradha786
May 12, 2014 08:06
#7
saahir: It was half moon night.. At the sea-shore.. A girl alone.. Roaming her fingers.. On the sandy ground.. Sketching some lines.. Throwing a glance.. Looking at them.. Changing her angles.. I was at a distance.. Little far.. Suddenly I heard a cry.. Why you broke my heart..? Where I was wrong..? Why did you go away..?
Heart-touching lines smiley truly emotional..dear..
_ShAnE_StArK_
Jan 7, 2016 04:24
#8
Sad one bro...