A faceless enemy (what's there to Celebrate)
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Rohan786
Mar 15, 2014 11:37
A faceless enemy (what's there to Celebrate) He appear to be a ladd of maybe 9 yrs. old. It's Friday, as our troop's prepared to move out unto enemy territory, and then KABOOM!!...he becomes a suicide bomber. WOW! face- less at such a young age. Now as I gather my comrade's body parts (as well as my thou- ght's) to myself I say, "these people's belong in a cage". Pain in Irag, will it ever end, here children's are taught too kill again & again. Our Boy'zz in misery, misery all around us, the stinch of death is everywhere. Their fearless leader leads no more. Soon he's capture, "one would think, finally!! and now answer's of life can be restore, but sadly there's only more bloodshed here in Irag. And a salacious cloud still hoovers above our heads as the dead bodie's continue's to rise, another soldier get sent home and familie's shall not be able to stop the flow of tear's pouring from their eye's. (faceless at such a young age) Our Boy's and Gal's in misery - here in a country, were there is no love, "A faceless enemy", we continue to fight. Our Congressmen and Senator's vote to keep this sinceles war going, "for our freedom", lying to themselve's and to the American people's. "For our Freedom", "I don't understand-how can freedom be justified with a bullet and a gun". How can Freedom be (?) when every Saturday you'll be burying your daughter or your son. Someday soon we do get to go home, from here to a faceless nation. As the dead bodie's continue to rise, and before the break of dawn starts another day. Your lil 9 year old goes outside to play. In this land of confusion lil boy's also goes outside, freedom for him is to suicidily kill the enemy-each and every morning in the name of Allah his mother tells him. So 10 U.S. sold- ier's live's are gone, more are on the way. Remember their President is dead and gone while our wants a "Celebration". P.S.... This particular poem came to me in a dream, as in a dream I was there (in Irag) holding this soldier who had been shot, and he relate's this particular poem for me to write
-LILY-
Mar 15, 2014 15:50
thats a nice story... smiley
ArjunPratap
Mar 18, 2014 02:58
very nice bro. keep posting
Crownstar
Mar 18, 2014 03:28
nice poem,i was even touched to the marrow, i pray for peace in iraq -AMEN
Princess_of_Love
Mar 18, 2014 03:31
Nice.
S-ALI.RAZA
Mar 18, 2014 04:49
Nice r0han
Tochi Prudence
Mar 18, 2014 11:34
I pray 4 d peace of God in Iraq so dt dere wil be no more shared of bloods
Georginia
Mar 18, 2014 11:55
Nice Rohan smiley
dellie
Mar 19, 2014 05:15
Rohan786: A faceless enemy (what's there to Celebrate) He appear to be a ladd of maybe 9 yrs. old. It's Friday, as our troop's prepared to move out unto enemy territory, and then KABOOM!!...he becomes a suicide bomber. WOW! face- less at such a young age. Now as I gather my comrade's body parts (as well as my thou- ght's) to myself I say, "these people's belong in a cage". Pain in Irag, will it ever end, here children's are taught too kill again & again. Our Boy'zz in misery, misery all around us, the stinch of death is everywhere. Their fearless leader leads no more. Soon he's capture, "one would think, finally!! and now answer's of life can be restore, but sadly there's only more bloodshed here in Irag. And a salacious cloud still hoovers above our heads as the dead bodie's continue's to rise, another soldier get sent home and familie's shall not be able to stop the flow of tear's pouring from their eye's. (faceless at such a young age) Our Boy's and Gal's in misery - here in a country, were there is no love, "A faceless enemy", we continue to fight. Our Congressmen and Senator's vote to keep this sinceles war going, "for our freedom", lying to themselve's and to the American people's. "For our Freedom", "I don't understand-how can freedom be justified with a bullet and a gun". How can Freedom be (?) when every Saturday you'll be burying your daughter or your son. Someday soon we do get to go home, from here to a faceless nation. As the dead bodie's continue to rise, and before the break of dawn starts another day. Your lil 9 year old goes outside to play. In this land of confusion lil boy's also goes outside, freedom for him is to suicidily kill the enemy-each and every morning in the name of Allah his mother tells him. So 10 U.S. sold- ier's live's are gone, more are on the way. Remember their President is dead and gone while our wants a "Celebration". P.S.... This particular poem came to me in a dream, as in a dream I was there (in Irag) holding this soldier who had been shot, and he relate's this particular poem for me to write
[quote=Rohan786]A faceless enemy (what's there to Celebrate) He appear to be a ladd of maybe 9 yrs. old. It's Friday, as our troop's prepared to move out unto enemy territory, and then KABOOM!!...he becomes a suicide bomber. WOW! face- less at such a young age. Now as I gather my comrade's body parts (as well as my thou- ght's) to myself I say, "these people's belong in a cage". Pain in Irag, will it ever end, here children's are taught too kill again & again. Our Boy'zz in misery, misery all around us, the stinch of death is everywhere. Their fearless leader leads no more. Soon he's capture, "one would think, finally!! and now answer's of life can be restore, but sadly there's only more bloodshed here in Irag. And a salacious cloud still hoovers above our heads as the dead bodie's continue's to rise, another soldier get sent home and familie's shall not be able to stop the flow of tear's pouring from their eye's. (faceless at such a young age) Our Boy's and Gal's in misery - here in a coP
Kayli
Mar 19, 2014 20:49
Great topic Rohan smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:24
Thanks Kayli smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:25
Thanks _AraGon smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:25
Thanks dellie smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:26
Thanks Georginia smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:27
Thanks -LILY- smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:28
Thanks ArjunPratab smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:28
Thanks bright smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:29
Thanks princess_of_love smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:29
Thanks S-ALI.RAZA smiley
Rohan786
Mar 20, 2014 08:30
Thanks Tochi... smiley
DaNGeRoUs_SwAG
Mar 26, 2014 14:34
Not bad.....
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