A Refused Proposal
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Fremder_Aryan
2012/12/11 04:36
last time when I'd met my friend Mr. Vidyut, I promised him that I would be back to home empty handed. since many a days I had been seeking a story to write but unfortunately ( perhaps for futures fortune) I couldn't help myself write any. And these is the first story that made me narrate this evening in perforce while I was looking the rain out the window. with no late , I must start from the starting. last week, when I came online on facebook, I received a friend request by a strange girl. A girl whose name I can't share with you. I added her in my friendlist and soon we started chatting online and offline. Soon we became intimate friends. Friends who shared their loneliness with each other especially when both, she and I felt sleepless at midnight. At first approach, I'm always a disgusting man with a cruel intentions. So was I to her. I treated her like a hungry man of erotic talks.I don't know how but soon I began to feel a pinch in my heart. By the time I had no idea what it was. Let me confess one thing She was no longer a stranger for me. Later I came to know she was my friend's girlfriend's friend. If we simply learn it, we find she was girl's side and I was boy's. our chit-chat went on and nearly taking a direction. Once I asked her for her mobile no. and she quietly gave me. I still am surprised how she believed me blindly ( I think its metaphor, actually we're friends, in fact close ones, so she gave me her no.). afterwards, I must have talked her many a times. talked about what we doing right then, where we belonged, how we doing, which kind of persons we hate and love,, anything.....ev erything but sexual affairs. actually I was being little formal now. When those couples I mean her friend as well as mine got to know everything, then planned to each other. They planned to see each-other in park. Here the 'each- other' means those couples who were encouraging us two to make a love story. A love story meant to be- they never saw each other, they grew friends via facebook, and now they standing together, they are in love now. Earlier the plot was secret for me ( I don't know whether my girl was acknowledged to it or not. Today, in evening, at 5:30, when I joined my friend aditya entering the park, I saw two girls. One was aditya's gf and other one was mine-to-be. When four of us gathered, exchanging hi and good evening. Aditya's girlfriend reminded me how I talked to her friend on facebook and that when I had a fortune to talk her face to face right then, I should avail it. They left us two sitting on a bench that was placed under a luxuriant tree.Definitely We're feeling uncomfortable, In fact I was at my worst. I kept a sufficient space between us. Both of us were sitting at the opposite edges. I stared conversation with a simple 'SOOOOOO'. she answered me with the same word. And gradually our talk found a direction. Initially we talked about what we had already done on facebook, but that crucial find we did so just to find something to do. We talked about career, our family background, our dreams, our vices and virtues, our disappointment, our past, our grieves, our past-love (s) and last thing that kept persisting all the time was talk of our friends who were kissing each other in some bush. I guess She was talkative but I loved her truthfulness. I was quite impressed. All of sudden I interrupted her saying one thing- " listen, if you don't mind, let me tell you why I came here." and the next split of second I said "I can cry million tears and walk million miles just to be with you. I love you. Will you marry me if you become a singer and I become a govt. employee in future. your yes or no?" P.T.O
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Fremder_Aryan
2012/12/11 04:41
she wanted to be a singer she had told me before half an hour and I added that in my proposal. A vendor came to us and asked us if we wanted some beverages. We nodded no. then, she said to me "no, sorry anurag, but no". For a moment, even my heart stopped beating let alone my movements. Afterwards she tried to manage the condition. She said," Anurag, you love me thats fine but..... I no longer believe in boys. Boys love a girl for true till she loves him." I remarked,"then, miss (........) ! please promise me you won't love me for the rest of your life". She was silent. For 2 minutes I was sitting there holding my hands against each other, adjusting my spects over and over and trying to resist my tears. Then, I said," I wish I could have some water. I"m dying for water at this crucial moment." We exchanged smiles. I stopped and said to her,"WELLLL, IF YOU DON'T HAVE PROBLEM, COULD YOU SIT ALONE FOR FIVE MINUTES? SHE AND ADITYA WILL BE COMING BACK. PLEASURE TO MEET YOU MISS(.......... .), FOR THE LAST TIME( it was first too). BABYE. HAVE A NICE NIGHT." I silently came out of the park, trying to wipe my tears with my shivering hands. I caught a bus, for back to home.
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Doncle
2012/12/11 07:10
Take heart Bro.....
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adamjr
2012/12/11 09:16
Well, I wouldn't sweat it too much. There's other fish in the sea. In my own opinion, I think you were rushing into marriage and you led your heart get the best of yourself with the love that you had for her. Maybe she would stop and think about how much you loved her and how much you would never stop loving her. Cause in my own opinion that you were the man in her life even though you did met on facebook, talked on the phone and met face to face. That's a good thing. I don't know if your still taking to her or just being friends with her. But I would advise you to follow your heart and let God guyed you into your heart. Maybe you didn't get the woman in your life. But just think you may not have that woman in your life, but you still have your very own heart. And again, there's other fish in the sea. I hope that you get the woman in your life and let God guyed you in His life forever in His lasting love.
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Frank73
2012/12/11 15:04
Too long bro, i cant finish it
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yemadep
2012/12/12 17:36
Am coming for this
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Dehannah
2012/12/12 21:31
sorry to hear this disappointment.hope u get what u really want.
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Rebellion
2012/12/13 17:18
Thanks to the word limit smiley
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KenMane
2012/12/13 20:51
I'm sorry,I'll finish reading it tommorow
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Macgyver
2012/12/18 11:20
Feeling sad.
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