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THE_SPEAR_KING 2011/10/31 10:46
THE_SPEAR_KING 2011/10/31 10:46
Late at night as i lay in
bed,
As many thoughts
rush through my head,
I think about the weak
and strong,
I question all the right
from wrong,
I wonder who could i
really be,
I think of what’s
gotten into me,
I hang out with the
entirely wrong crowd,
All these thoughts i
am thinking out loud,
What is this life i am
in?
My head is now
beginning to spin,
I pace my room
without a sound,
Walking in circles round
and round,
All these questions i
have to ask,
I can never finish a
single task,
My heart is beating
really fast,
Asking myself will this
really last
Nothing i do feels like
it’s right,
Even though i am very
bright,
Why does it feel this
way?,
The exact same thing
every day
So here i am thinking in
my head,
All the negative things
i’ve said,
This is not the real me,
It definitely cannot be
Sitting here thinking
for a while,
I find myself beginning
to smile,
All these emotions i
have to express,
Letting go of all this
stress,
Sitting here in the rain,
Feeling all of this pain,
Like a flower i begin to
wilt,
Holding onto all this
guilt,
While falling asleep i
begin to cry,
Thinking about how
hard i try,
As I am beginning to
find my way,
I think who am i today
Thinking about all the
nights i cried,
Holding all these
feelings inside,
Now getting all them
off my chest,
Doing good, only hoping
for the best,
My life is like a story
told,
My heart is something
that i hold,
It’s not something on
my sleeve,
As many things as i
achieve
I think about all the
positive things,
Hurt feels like a big bee
sting,
Life isn’t something I
can find in a tree,
It’s only what’s inside
of me
Late at night as i lay in
bed,
All these thoughts
rushing through my
head,
I no longer think about
the weak and strong,
Nor do i question the
right from wrong.
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******************
bed,
As many thoughts
rush through my head,
I think about the weak
and strong,
I question all the right
from wrong,
I wonder who could i
really be,
I think of what’s
gotten into me,
I hang out with the
entirely wrong crowd,
All these thoughts i
am thinking out loud,
What is this life i am
in?
My head is now
beginning to spin,
I pace my room
without a sound,
Walking in circles round
and round,
All these questions i
have to ask,
I can never finish a
single task,
My heart is beating
really fast,
Asking myself will this
really last
Nothing i do feels like
it’s right,
Even though i am very
bright,
Why does it feel this
way?,
The exact same thing
every day
So here i am thinking in
my head,
All the negative things
i’ve said,
This is not the real me,
It definitely cannot be
Sitting here thinking
for a while,
I find myself beginning
to smile,
All these emotions i
have to express,
Letting go of all this
stress,
Sitting here in the rain,
Feeling all of this pain,
Like a flower i begin to
wilt,
Holding onto all this
guilt,
While falling asleep i
begin to cry,
Thinking about how
hard i try,
As I am beginning to
find my way,
I think who am i today
Thinking about all the
nights i cried,
Holding all these
feelings inside,
Now getting all them
off my chest,
Doing good, only hoping
for the best,
My life is like a story
told,
My heart is something
that i hold,
It’s not something on
my sleeve,
As many things as i
achieve
I think about all the
positive things,
Hurt feels like a big bee
sting,
Life isn’t something I
can find in a tree,
It’s only what’s inside
of me
Late at night as i lay in
bed,
All these thoughts
rushing through my
head,
I no longer think about
the weak and strong,
Nor do i question the
right from wrong.
*******************
******************
Lelsi 2011/10/31 12:01
Good one
, i especially like the line :"Life isn’t something I can find in a tree, It’s only what’s inside of me.". Keep it up.
Good one
, i especially like the line :"Life isn’t something I can find in a tree, It’s only what’s inside of me.". Keep it up.
EpIcInCoGnItO 2011/10/31 18:42
Very inspiring and thought provoking. Most of the lines are awesome. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful.
Very inspiring and thought provoking. Most of the lines are awesome. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful.
Pr1ya 2011/11/01 10:25
By the way, *karma* for you -SPEAR-KING- for a great poem. Please don't be mad that I used your poem as inspiration for mine. I know mine aint as great as yours. I wasn't trying to better it, just wanted to share it.
By the way, *karma* for you -SPEAR-KING- for a great poem. Please don't be mad that I used your poem as inspiration for mine. I know mine aint as great as yours. I wasn't trying to better it, just wanted to share it.
THE_SPEAR_KING 2011/11/01 10:57
hey,
buddy
its not mine.
I just copy nd paste it from somewhere.
But
u r the person who deserves salute for ur creation.
Nd a karma from me.
Dnt feel sad
i understand
ur situation.
Nd i know u r so brave.
Be strong
try to refresh nd restart.
Life seems gud nd preety just we hv to change our views. . . . . .
God bless u.
hey,
buddy
its not mine.
I just copy nd paste it from somewhere.
But
u r the person who deserves salute for ur creation.
Nd a karma from me.
Dnt feel sad
i understand
ur situation.
Nd i know u r so brave.
Be strong
try to refresh nd restart.
Life seems gud nd preety just we hv to change our views. . . . . .
God bless u.
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