Raplordz El-jay vs Shaev7 by
DotmonKing 2011/04/17 23:12
RAPLORDZ ROUND 2, BATTLE MATCH DAY 1
Rules
1. timelimit shall be 24 hourz.
2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post total of 6 post after each match)
3. No interferance until after match.
4. No biting. winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round.
Goodluck to you raplords
Shaev7 2011/04/18 09:22
Goin bck 2da OLD DAYS/mr porter super man on da beat,i cary my HOSTAGES/so how we gona do it? U gota pay HOMMAGE/i wana cream u up,i'l do dat wt POMMADE/
jus sum freestyling... Da brk was too much am losin my krystyling... Wat u go do,wen SHIT HITS THE FAN? Lyk Shady askd ar u gona STAND N FIGHT LYK A MAN?
Oh sh!t! Wat am i doin?/am i supoz 2b singin or skoolin?/ok nw letz begn da rap so i wana get mcee el chewin/
words lyk RAZORZ/my flow lyk BLAZERZ/beat u wt STAPLERZ/n choke u wt lots of PAPERZ/how do i stop ur piss,i put u on sum DIAPERZ/u a baby in dis game,u probably nid a BABY^SEATER/sum says RAW was sweet,so SHAEVYs^BITTER/oh damn i miss my HOmmies HNIC n RAW/nw u steppd on my toes 4 eatn up HNIC n wait 4my WAR/i ain gvin a phuk gota pul out my CLAW/sh!t watz WRONG/wt dis mic its havin me so POOR/
hell is cumin 4me now... Now EL-JAY da game's OVA/i beat to dust n pack u body wt a HOVER(vaccum cleaner)/i cn c u tend to cum HOTER/bt here ends ur game n b da door POTER/d mur u write,u rhymez bcum SHOTER/im nt gona kil quick,juz wana feel yu WHACK SH!T/im putin up any nw juz sum RAP HIT/am only juz doin sum FREESTYLES/after slutin on my tape KRISTYLES(KRS-1)/section...
Oh damn! Hell cum up Heaven cum DOWN!!! Back to Shaev7....
[i]ya kno cuz ima alws introduce MASELF/ya words ar dose old rhymes covered wt cubwebs on MA^SHELF/am SHAEV^7/da phukn RAVEN/dat stopz suckaz frm entryin HEAVEN/its tym 4ds game 2enta d nxt LEVEL/ya b outa yu 'jay' n mak it EL-EVEN/
now ~killin~ds hommie is my only AIM/i'v b ~feelin~ds rhymes nw im bck 2hav ds gay TAMED/bulsh!t ya wana c me ~chillin~am alrdy on my FAME/imma b cumin lyka ~typhoon~to destroy ur GAME/ds bitch calls himself EL^JAY/but last wk i saw him @ HEL^GATE/phukn dresd tatard SELL^in^HAY/am down wt AIDS~bt i phukd ur bitch n u got INFECTED/am so psych n pyranoid i nid 2b INJECTED/wt ~LSD~wt ~PCP~drugz u body in da mutuary im gona get it EJECTED/nw do ya sign of da cross cuz u abt 2b REJECTD/dippin my hands in 2 ur ^BUTT^remuv yur ~CLOAK~KA~(cloaca)/attack u so bad n tak out u ^NUTS^n ~CLOAK~YA~/lyk a school ~TEACHER~i beat u wt a CANE/lyk a penticoster ~PREACHER~i sermon ur problem on d church STAGE/shaev alws da RAP^LORD/no1 cn hit me i butch u wit a SHARP^SWORD/u rem our 1st BATTLE?/nw i c u wana claim da TITLE/nah imma only gv u eleto's MANTLE/ya kno cuz its whacko's STATUS/lemme bring bck da old ~SCURGE~rhymes i dealt wt u @ur F^ACE/u rem i was da *illest* ~BUTCH~in ds PL^ACE/smashin ur body on a ~DUTCH~rail track wtout a TR^ACE/ok now juz gav u one of my ~TOUCH~in ds C^ASE/so whose 1of ~SUCH~n da MASTA^ACE/u gota kip runin wt ~CLUTCH~n am gona b cumin wt my CH^ACE(CHASE)/amma ~exhale~d life in u,n have ABIOTIC/breathin out studio n ~inhale~punches cal me RAP^BIOTIC/u shulda told me u wer ^astraphobia^b4 i came wit THUNDER/nw let me speak whil ur repliez gona b BLUNDER/i stab u wt a broken glass of TUMBLER/ya try 2rap bt i made an electric bed n put ur ASS^UNDER(asunder)/no1 phukz wt me wen am da ONLY^DOMMINIUM/my sin was too much dat i puke at da church wen i took da HOLY^COMMUNION/POPE BENEDICT XVI handed me to DEVIL/u beta b ready cuz am cumin wt da motive of EVIL/oh sh.t am gona c u in Hell 4ds SEQUEL/[/i]
done! Just flowing... Holla man.
El-jay 2011/04/18 14:16
no words written down
try to kill me and i lay you down in d ground
neva see me smile, always frown
datz why am d king with the crown
got a style
am so fly that the sky looks up to me
am rip this shxt till it kills me
my hommie shaev7 still shine with me
dont smoke free weed
am ghostly gravy, go 2 d graveyard see me
got a grave ready for you,
what da fuck are you size 42?
i dnt give a fuck i'l still bury you!
I flow like big spirit u'l neva find me in room 307/u'l only see me thu d window of a boeing 747/
feel the pain when u fly by/see me get respect wen i drive by/i spit the illest rhymes when am high/higher than high that happens wen my mind aint mine/
to catch up to me u gotta step up da pace
i'l slam ur shxt frm ur ass 2 ur face!
Shaev7 2011/04/18 16:01
No mercy/4dis lessons/imma kip phuckn u wildly lyk my bitch jessy/
ok count em,oh sh.t am nt comin yet juz wana hit u wit ur own WORDS/cuz u've been beatin n bruise left wt SOREZ/u tlkd abt FROWN/phuck d SOUND/i hrd u say u head got d CROWN/oh sh!t damn HOW?/wen i run da strtz of rap TOWN/killin em flowz n vomitin metaphorez n punch~LINEZ PLOW/c ur wrds ass xposed lyk FOW/haha na am alrdy @dis,take a cap on ya dick~head n gimme da king CROWN/how ya eva see da sh.t i wrote DOWN/ya sh.t juz xplainz who da phuck u ar nufin bt CLOWN/i told ya da LONGER/u writ da SHORTER/dey become SUCKER!/
now i come,count my linez,i only wana kil dis punk wit juz 7^BARZ/dril ya heart wt a lead pencil~n leavin ur face wt EVIL^SCARS/put ya butt down ghost spirit sh.t ~pussy~phukn boobs ya dug ur grave by replyin my punchd LINES/dis juz da 3rd rolin 2my 4th whch strucks u wt PARA^LYSIS/amma chemical ~anal~ysis~eatin ya rectum infects ur blood wt complications of ~dis~ease~(diss eas)havin u digestive tract hung @my bathroon n rectify u thru proces of DIA^LYSIS/nw how ya gona detect ds illnes ~diabetes melitus~i infest u wit? Go lick a bag of salt suck ya alrdy lost dis sh.t juz go see da doc 4sum DIA^GNOSIS/my dick got teeth dan chain saw,phuck ~ur bitch~til she bleeds,no mercy was da idea my eyes nt on em socket~bt i kno am kilin sum 1 el-gay in ds bitch,oh its alms my las barz n stil sedementry,gota transform nw 4ds last murder ya soul n stnd firm tru DIA^GENE^SIS/
NAH EL YA DEAD! Jus spit ya last/lemme let u hav ya heart pill lyk everlast/
El-jay 2011/04/18 17:59
i'l be spilling d raps
and niggas hiding like rats
i speak of no other crap
and i be killing the feeling dat u be feeling when u be willing to move in
u call me serial killer
i make moves betta than da grand fisher
all d best is wat i wish ya
poor murfuka ur bitch is a fisher
i pissed on ur bitch and dissed her
fuck you and ur household, fuck ur momma moda fokka
crappy flappy. am nt ready 4 dis shxt, juz flowing wit wats in my ass
sorry jack ass
aint giving u my ill side, take dis shxt up n see where you get to
i had a bad dream modafuka tried to kill me in my SLEEP
i take revenge i come wit my whole SLEET
i live a high life on a JET SKI
u retarded demon cnt evn drive an S.U.V
am da illest em cee
i appear as one but of me ther's three
u cant even affort a fucking TV
bullsheet!
ok, i got da sheet in ma blood now, inspiration from DIRTY MONEY
i been rapping since TWELVE THIRTY
sheeet, my blood is rhyming
damn, d doctors declared me immortal
if u win its because d devil is impartial
fuck modafuck, i strangle you with my vain n drown u in my blood
fight with me and die without me
my words so shart i cut my tongue off
its a rip off, slip off and die from da cliff top
am ill words cant describe
i meet u one on one and u'l need a doctor to prescribe
some shxt to revive you
am down, i need to be fixed i cnt look at d crucifix
Shaev7 2011/04/18 21:10
METAPHOREZ!
Yo El-jay alws AT~IT/burnin wtout fuel n drinkin ASS~IDS(acid)/hitin me wt one ill punch ya strangle me wt ur vain/ n drown me wt ya blood// dat was an ill game/ther but w8 4my rott//
you'l soon gona get blind by my SPIT/get ur hands ~surrender~n ur legs reTREAT/ya wana do it Biologicaly bt i com Metaphoricaly,i choke yu wit my FART/n also hav u drown by my cum//you alws silly n careles as jerry da CAT/whil i get it all n toment u as tom//
as I blaze my ~chronic~weed da smoke formz da CLOUD/i spit sh.t here in NIG wt low mic n speakers bt hommiez @ USA say am LOUD/acordin 2 Psalm my cup ova FLOW(rap ova flow)/whil ya head was anointd wt grease//say wat ya wana say,evn cal me da black DOVE/my only motive is 2kill u wt ease//
ima take on flight wt ya boe 307 plane,witout a PROPELLA/n have you phuckd 7 timez by a female GODZILLA/@d fertilization n gestation u giv birth 2a baby CHINCHINLA/how ya gon beliv as my pitbull mates wt a GORILLA/dick lyk inceneratorz EXHAUST PIPE/am so sory,bt i'll hav u killd lyk ***** CHRIST/dnt even think of win,or die TRYIN/cuz u neva exist u juz WHILIN'/these words wer writen by MOSES(my rap)/lyk he was snt 2Egypt,ya disobey da 1st plague shal b ur dick turned 2 7 HOSES/havin yu wet da ground n impregnant da SOIL/ hey BOY/grown 2 heavy TREES/smoked by I n my 6 yr old NIECE/hate horney,bt i harbour BEEZ/cum 2my gate @ nite,ya wil FREEZE/da only way out is ta b on ya phukin KNEEZ/wat ya shoutd was NIGGA SHAEV PLEASE!/am just killin u wt metaphorez n packz of SIMILEZ/amma make ya hand dat seem Long to a phukn SHORT SLEAVE(amputation)/goin tru my genetic trait records,i got da gene of a BEAST(genetic mutation)/with my ~ear drum~was use to produce da sound of my BEAT/as drop my last word on you,ya begn 2use ur ~foot~to EAT!/
i was stabbed wt a sword my soul refuse to BLEED!
YA SNOOZE,YA LOOZE!
[shaev7] on tha
El-jay 2011/04/18 22:24
ok, i see u wana spit rap but i spit iller fact even if my skin aint BLACK/modafuka rapping like u LONELY/ u need help beta consult like 2 HOMMIES/demons cnt get me cos am out d COUNTRY/ and i be swinging words like i be a MONKEY/ taking me on battle is like making a meal u cudn't EAT/ my words drop heavy break ur FEET/ u got no food so u wana take on me a BEEF/ i kill by strong will datz wat i dnt FEEL/ my words good FOOD/ i dream of rapping on d surface of d MOON/ rite now am in d MOOD to teach ya hw ta go 2 SCHOOL/ i be like a bull bullshxt, fuck motherfuck/i look in d sky and i see my ill side floating up there feeding d poor SOULS/ i keep words in my lyrical BOWL/ u drink from it and u'l never live to tell about it/ i be writting ill words, like 3 million words per MINUTE/got a credit card no LIMMIT/ am real nothing about me is a GIMMICK/ my brain is a 100 percent CYNIC/ i drive people from deir graves back to d CLINIC/ dis battle, am gona WIN IT/ modafuka i kill u from ur bones am not HATING/ i love killing come check my REGISTRATION/ i be d leader of the russian FEDERATION/ , can u comprehend dat? its unreal to a HUMAN EYE/ but u feel n know ur death is CLOSE BY/ my words is what u will DIE BY/ i still ram ur dead body when i ROVE BY/ am pure evil no tint of goodness,
fuck you and your SNOOZE/ i BOOZE n feel the buzz, ur words juz sounded like a fly's buzz, fuck your soul...cocksucker
DotmonKing 2011/04/18 22:48
Thanks to our 2 mcees for this great input. You guys are first-class.
Now i await the judgements of my co-judges.
EloraM23 2011/04/19 05:10
Shaev7 and El-jay both have a good style and rhythm. But found Shaev7 to have pulled it up just a bit more and in turn being my pick. Great stuff from both though.
ACIDized 2011/04/20 06:00
El-jay had a clean lyrics! Shaev7 mixed his punches wid all categoryz! Over-all his verses were impressive.
I vote Shaev7.
Rosay 2011/04/22 10:57
I vote for el-jay..clean lyrics
DotmonKing 2011/04/23 10:57
my vote goes to shaev.
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