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The Spirits of the Mountain

Lindi102 · Nov 4, 2010 21:07 9 85
Lindi102 OP
Nov 4, 2010 21:07
"Pliz Mr David do nt go to the mt.",said John. That mountain is haunted, their spirits there, spirits of our ancestors. No man cumz bck from mponje mt. ,every1 who has gone there has disappeared, no1 has returnd. I undastand ur concerns John, but i hav bn havin thez strange drmz, sm1 z callin 4rm the mt. tellin me to go nyt afta nyt. The nxt mornin the sun shone so brightly acros the sky as they trekked up the mt., the path they were on was bushy n creepy. They had bn walkin 4 a long tym when they heard
9 replies
Lindi102 OP
Nov 4, 2010 21:13
#1
sounds. Drums beatin, voices, the wind blew so profusely. A bunch of old men startd to appear n disappear ryt in their faces. Then a woman wit red hair n huge green eyes appeared. She came close n quickly grabbd David. David cried 4 help n John screamd. And b4 Johns very eyes the woman n David disappeared. John ran al the way home and told every 1 w@ happend. No one eva saw David eva again.
Laketempest
Nov 4, 2010 21:26
#2
smiley wow this is really a nice story and a mysterious one also, i enjoyed reading it. Very interesting.
Mahesh
Nov 5, 2010 02:15
#3
Nice Storysmiley I saw david after that smiley
DareDevil
Nov 5, 2010 17:24
#4
Nice..
STAIN
Nov 6, 2010 07:43
#5
Hmmm! Wonderful.
__-dEvIL-hUNt-__
Nov 6, 2010 08:38
#6
Nice st0ry !! Well d0ne !! KeEP IT up
Marlou
Nov 7, 2010 06:18
#7
Ohwow! Nice story. Keep it up.
Fluxion
Feb 7, 2011 14:22
#8
i enjoyed reading it. Very interesting.
_ShAnE_StArK_
May 2, 2015 07:55
#9
Nice story..